River ribbons

On Wednesday, we started off the lesson looking at some artwork by New Hope Impressionists and other artists who have created views of the river. A range of images was included, showing sights from the Delaware River Gap down to Gloucester, NJ. We talked about how our last word brainstorm for the river cinquain poem was just from our heads and our ideas of rivers, but this time we'd use the pictures for inspiration. With the kids paired up, each pair got a color copy of an image to view, and the class was instructed to use the title and artist as the starting point for a word splash, then consider the setting (including season, weather, physical features of the landscape), actions (what people were or could do in that painting), and sensory words (how it would feel to be in the picture). Students spent about 30 minutes together brainstorming ideas. The brainstorm was intended to prepare students with inspiration for a free verse poem to be written after they completed their river ribbon.

Daniel Garber, Tohickon

Using the river poems students wrote based off of last week's wordsplash, students wrote them out onto ribbons to be sewn into the river for the collaborative piece. We remembered a reading we had done a few weeks before comparing a river to "ribbons of water". I asked them about what was important about a cinquain form and suggested we change colors on the ribbons to suggest the different lines of the poem. I explained how to use the fabric markers on the ribbons, and then the students copied their poems onto the ribbons. It required a light touch, which some students had no trouble with. Other students used too much pressure and were frustrated with how much the markers "bled" on the ribbons. I find this to be an interesting exercise for penmanship- it needed students to slow down and be more careful about spacing and sensitive to the surface. Some students figured it out, and others still had trouble. To diffuse the frustration with the medium we compared the ribbons again to water, saying we were setting our words into the water. This revealed another metaphor for the process, which not particularly overtly made as a connection, was one of the ideas we were interested in having the students learn.
Once students completed copying out their cinquain poem, they brought their ribbon over to the collaborative piece to select its placement. Students were very familiar with the river features vocabulary in stating where they wanted their ribbon to be along the river.
With everybody pinned, Cindy explained how to continue with their free verse poem inspired by the images at the beginning of class. She compared word choice in a poem to the colors, textures, and brushstrokes an artist uses in a painting. I reinforced this idea by showing the elements of color and texture in our collaborative piece. The rest of class was spent helping students with the writing process.